Yes, your the narrator is on lower volume. So that people will turn up the sound and get sucked in to the story.
That way you get scared in the later part of the story thanks for critisism.
I'll take a lot of that with me for part
too as it looks right now it will be some 30 minutes in total!!! There will be more action as the story developes!!
Chases Murders Mystery Creeps and Blood.
The drawings are in a style so that means that you like the style or you don't Give me suggestions on what you like to see story wise although a lot of it is written allready i can do a lot
in the actual screenplay.
Gr. IIPhase.